I love the first image you have on your title page Sophie, it sums up what you article is about perfectly. Some good facts on your second slide, although I'm not sure how the sweets relate to the topic (perhaps it is Martian Rock, aka a sweet sold in town around England... ask mum if she knows what I'm talking about!). Do you think the bullet points are necessary, or do you think a new paragraph would suffice? Good facts have been included in your background information slide. Perhaps you could answer questions like, 'Is it the first rover to land on Mars?' and 'What is the purpose of its journey?' On your quotes/opinions slide I'm not sure if your quote is purposeful, but it is set out correctly. I think from memory the scientists were very pleased with the progress so far... perhaps their is a more interesting and meaningful quote in the information somewhere? OR maybe you could add some more detail to explain the significance of your quote, and what it actually means. Well done for identifying your sources of information. Remember to include the specific link to the article rather than the Stuff website in general, as otherwise it will be too tricky for people to find the original article should they wish to read it. Overall, well done Sophie! You did a great job to get your presentation completed on time and I really look forward to seeing your next presentation; I wonder what will happen in the news next?
I love the first image you have on your title page Sophie, it sums up what you article is about perfectly. Some good facts on your second slide, although I'm not sure how the sweets relate to the topic (perhaps it is Martian Rock, aka a sweet sold in town around England... ask mum if she knows what I'm talking about!). Do you think the bullet points are necessary, or do you think a new paragraph would suffice?
ReplyDeleteGood facts have been included in your background information slide. Perhaps you could answer questions like, 'Is it the first rover to land on Mars?' and 'What is the purpose of its journey?'
On your quotes/opinions slide I'm not sure if your quote is purposeful, but it is set out correctly. I think from memory the scientists were very pleased with the progress so far... perhaps their is a more interesting and meaningful quote in the information somewhere? OR maybe you could add some more detail to explain the significance of your quote, and what it actually means.
Well done for identifying your sources of information. Remember to include the specific link to the article rather than the Stuff website in general, as otherwise it will be too tricky for people to find the original article should they wish to read it.
Overall, well done Sophie! You did a great job to get your presentation completed on time and I really look forward to seeing your next presentation; I wonder what will happen in the news next?
Good work! The backgrounds don't always relate to the text but it looks really cool.
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